anilaurel
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Post by anilaurel on Jun 19, 2009 8:24:39 GMT 10
Title: Devour Prompt: #4 Food Rating: T Warning for people being eaten. Summary: The Kraken was hungry
The water boiled as black tentacles ripped out of the sea and through the ships. Sailors and merchants screamed in terror as more and more ropes of muscle wrapped around comparatively small vessels. The boat groaned as it was lifted out of the water by the mythic creature. The thing, forgotten for a thousand years, devoured the man in the mast.
Ignoring the pleas to both him and every god in the pantheon, the monster swallowed him. Savouring the flavour of human flesh and the ocean salt.
One by one, each man was captured and swallowed.
The Kraken was hungry.
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Imogen
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Post by Imogen on Jun 19, 2009 9:35:30 GMT 10
Oh my gosh! A very clever take on the prompt. 'Devour,' indeed.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jun 19, 2009 11:55:30 GMT 10
Yow! I love this take on the prompt. It's very original -- and strangely readable, for something so icky.
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 20, 2009 18:49:48 GMT 10
Ooh, way cool take on the prompt! ^.^
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Post by Verasque on Jun 21, 2009 15:25:48 GMT 10
The thing, forgotten for a thousand years, devoured the man in the mast.You have an odd enticing way of writing. The piece gave me little shivers, and that is good
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Post by incarnadine on Jun 21, 2009 21:59:11 GMT 10
Wow, this was awesome!
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