Minuit
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Post by Minuit on May 3, 2009 23:26:39 GMT 10
Ok, so it's probably kind of obvious now that Alanna is my favourite character. I'm supposed to be doing my assignment, but I just couldn't resist doing a little Alanna art. Alanna - on old fashioned canvasAlanna - wild and bold
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Post by bloo on May 4, 2009 4:48:12 GMT 10
I love the first image , but the backround in the second one doesn't really suit those images in my opinion.
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Post by Katty on May 4, 2009 10:41:35 GMT 10
I love the first one
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Post by ubiquitous on May 4, 2009 13:00:42 GMT 10
Very nicely done! I like the first one best too!
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Post by Minuit on May 4, 2009 14:42:03 GMT 10
Thanks And I agree, the first one is best. The second one was sort of like a spur of the moment decision, and not as well thought out as the first one. I'll have to fiddle with the second one a bit more.
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Post by davidsgirl841444 on Jun 2, 2009 5:05:34 GMT 10
The art is absolutely beautiful
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Post by cha hoppy on Jun 2, 2009 8:49:33 GMT 10
I actually like the second one. As I like how th book cover images are more merged into the background, rather than how they just seemed placed in the first.
However, the second is missing from the first how the central Alanna, the one cut out, is not distinctly set out from the three background covers. I think it would be better if you did something with the background, or something with Alanna, that made her pop out more away from the background image as right now she is sort of lost within them instead of standing out from them, which I think is the affect you see in the first image. Not to mention, the text would need to be changed a little, as it seems more randomly placed when the background is uniform, as the structure they're based around in the first image, the poster feel of the covers, is not there like it is in the first....
Those are just my thoughts on the differences between the two.
But you did a wonderful job on these!! Lovely done! I hope to see more ^.^
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Post by Minuit on Jun 2, 2009 12:49:22 GMT 10
Thanks for the lovely comments and tips You're absolutely right, Alanna needs to stand out a bit more on the second one. I'll fiddle with it after exams, lol.
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