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Post by mistrali on Nov 13, 2021 20:19:10 GMT 10
Title: Keeping Score Rating: R Word Count: 23 Summary/Warnings: Violence, death (non-graphic). Dove watches her kingdom fall. Prompt: Count
King Barneshi’s army mow her soldiers down like sugarcane; after the massacre, Dove watches them tally the dead from her Grey Palace prison.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Nov 14, 2021 2:14:01 GMT 10
Oh, wow, the imagery of Dove's soldiers being mown down like sugarcane is so effective and painful, and then Dove watching them tally the dead from her Grey Palace prison is like the final piece of heartbreak.
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Post by mistrali on Nov 14, 2021 6:13:18 GMT 10
Thank you!
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