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Post by mistrali on Nov 8, 2021 16:59:52 GMT 10
Title: Monsoon Rating: G Word Count: 24 Warnings: None Summary/Notes: Wonders of Kypriang series (6 of 7)
As hundreds of parrots race to escape the torrent, the jungle canopy gains a squawking, jostling underlayer of lime, cobalt and gold.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Nov 12, 2021 6:24:56 GMT 10
Ooh, I love the way you described the parrots as an "underlayer of lime, cobalt, and gold" since I could really see those distinctive colors in my head, and I appreciate the squawking and jostling to engage my auditory senses and that sense of a thick jungle canopy as well. It all creates a very real setting in less than 25 words. Well done!
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Post by mistrali on Nov 12, 2021 21:30:42 GMT 10
Thank you so much!
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