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Post by mistrali on Nov 1, 2021 19:41:39 GMT 10
Title: Trace Rating: R Word Count: 28 Summary (and any Warnings): AU. Topabaw follows the trail. Warning for character death and violence. Prompt: Spy
In a trice, Topabaw’s agents trace gossip about the twice- royal to Balitang House; a fortnight afterwards, four of the family servants dangle from the harbour mouth.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Nov 2, 2021 0:21:19 GMT 10
Just wow, this sentence hit me like a gut punch. There is just so much action and intensity to it with the gossip being traced back to the servants at the Balitang House, and then the final stomach-dropping bit about the servants being hanged. It really is impressive how much story you managed to communicate in this one sentence, and I love so much that you are focusing on the Copper Isles and really exploring the sociopolitical turmoil and intrigue there.
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Post by mistrali on Nov 2, 2021 5:05:22 GMT 10
Thank you, Devil! The Isles are continually fascinating to me, so I’m glad this one resonated with you.
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