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Post by mistrali on Oct 21, 2020 19:38:15 GMT 10
Title: On All Sides Prompt: Suicide Rating: PG-13 Summary and Warnings: Battle Magic fix-it/ignore-it. Content warning for suicidal ideation and child labour/child slavery, at canon level. Words: 19
[Notes: I’m going off the Bay of Storms in assuming some part of Yanjing is coastal.
She’s surrounded by sea, but, chained to her fellow galley-slaves on both sides, Evvy abandons all thoughts of drowning.
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Post by Tamari on Oct 22, 2020 0:48:39 GMT 10
This one hit me like a brick! Beautifully phrased.
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Post by mistrali on Oct 22, 2020 1:02:42 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 22, 2020 2:15:29 GMT 10
You created such a powerful image with just one sentence. I can really see Evvy chained to the other galley slaves and surrounded by sea. My heart really went out to Evvy and her fellow slaves.
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Post by mistrali on Oct 22, 2020 2:17:30 GMT 10
You created such a powerful image with just one sentence. I can really see Evvy chained to the other galley slaves and surrounded by sea. My heart really went out to Evvy and her fellow slaves. Thank you! I’m glad I managed to get the horror of poor Evvy’s situation across.
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Post by Seek on Oct 22, 2020 3:18:12 GMT 10
This is really painful, and the horror really does come across powerfully - galley slaves and drowning. Poor Evvy D:
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Post by mistrali on Oct 22, 2020 3:26:37 GMT 10
Thank you - yes, well, Evvy really is caught between a rock (unfortunately only a figurative one) and a hard place here Both awful options.
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