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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 21, 2020 9:20:23 GMT 10
Title: Winter of Life
Rating: PG-13 for allusion to death and dying.
Word Count: 25
Summary: Buri in the winter of her life.
Winter of Life
In the winter of her life, Buri longed to race a wild K’miri pony across the snowy steppes of the Sarain highlands one last time.
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Post by mistrali on Oct 21, 2020 10:49:00 GMT 10
Title: Winter of Life Rating: PG-13 for allusion to death and dying. Word Count: 25 Summary: Buri in the winter of her life. Winter of Life In the winter of her life, Buri longed to race a wild K’miri pony across the snowy steppes of the Sarain highlands one last time. I love the way you’ve tied old age and winter with Buri’s homesickness for Sarain!
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Post by Seek on Oct 21, 2020 13:14:34 GMT 10
My heart, this hurts so badly
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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 22, 2020 9:36:14 GMT 10
mistrali , thank you so much for commenting! I couldn't resist tying winter to old age and dying but I also wanted to have that link of winter to Sarain and Bari's homesickness because to me it really made sense that as she neared the end of her life, Buri would long for her homeland. Seek , thank you so much for commenting! I do admit that my heart was breaking for Buri as I wrote this
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