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Post by mistrali on Jul 2, 2020 12:03:09 GMT 10
Series: Trade Winds Title: Hot Chocolate Rating: G Event: Seasons (Summer/Winter) Triathlon Words: 200. Summary: (including warnings): Daja and Polyam enjoy a hot drink. Warnings: None (except that I take no responsibility for chocolate and/or chilli cravings as a result of reading this fic).
Other Notes: The cups are made of bone china.
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Taking the chocolate carefully off the flame, Polyam used a small silver ladle to divide it into two tiny white cups decorated with plum blossoms. The vessel, unadorned and made of a silver-and-tin alloy, tapered beautifully to a spout.
“They’re ceramic with bone ash ground in,” said Polyam, seeing Daja’s gaze linger on them. “From Qidao, in southern Yanjing. They almost beat Tsaw’ha for haggling.” She held her steaming cup in both hands, sipped, and closed her eye.
Awed - Polyam must have done some very fine negotiation, to be able to afford such treasures - Daja followed suit and frowned. A fiery aftertaste underscored the bitterness.
“Is there cinnamon in this?” she guessed. But that wasn’t right. Cinnamon didn’t leave burning flecks on her tongue…
“Ginger?”
“Chilli!” exulted Polyam, her eye shining. “From the caravan, at twelve gold astrels a pound. Don’t make me remind you how much zokin we owe you,” she said, when Daja opened her mouth to protest. “It would be impolite, when you’re enjoying our hospitality.”
Daja grinned - three years hadn’t tempered Polyam’s bluntness - and savoured her second sip. It was wonderful to be in a Trader caravan, surrounded by cool night breezes and rustling canvas.
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Post by Kypriotha on Jul 2, 2020 20:26:02 GMT 10
I love how warm and cosy this fic makes me feel! It's equal parts from the hot chocolate and their relationship - I love how at ease they are with each other, which I'm glad to see hasn't made Polyam any less blunt 😄
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Post by mistrali on Jul 2, 2020 21:06:02 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by devilinthedetails on Jul 3, 2020 2:28:02 GMT 10
Oh, I really enjoyed this piece. Nice to see Polyam appear in a story, and I love all the rich, sensory details with the chili, and the references to the wider world with regard to Southern Yanjing. It just made the world feel so vibrant and fleshed out so I love little details like that. Thank you for sharing!
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Post by mistrali on Jul 3, 2020 6:17:57 GMT 10
Thanks devilinthedetails, that’s what I was going for, so I’m glad it came through! I love Polyam (reread FitF/Daja’s Book recently and realised all over again how complex a character she is, and how little love she gets in fic).
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Post by Tamari on Jul 3, 2020 13:24:59 GMT 10
In a similar vein, I love the way you paint a picture, especially in only 200 words. Great job with the descriptions, and the relationship between Daja and Polyam is sweet as well.
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Post by mistrali on Jul 3, 2020 13:55:26 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by Rosie on Jul 3, 2020 21:05:45 GMT 10
Confirm that I definitely want hot chocolate now!! This is a great piece, deceptively simple but I like their friendship, Polyam's prosperity (and sharp nature), and the little details that add up to a very rich fic
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Post by mistrali on Jul 3, 2020 21:51:57 GMT 10
Thanks Rosie
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