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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 14, 2018 23:38:39 GMT 10
Title: A Prince
Rating: PG-13 for references to childbirth
Word Count: 45
Summary: Lianne does her duty by her king and country.
A Prince
“It’s a prince,” announced the healer in a voice ragged as Lianne felt, and Lianne sagged into her pillows, tears of unfettered joy mingling with those of pure pain on her cheeks, relieved to have at last done her duty to her husband and kingdom.
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Post by Kypriotha on Oct 19, 2018 7:03:43 GMT 10
I can really feel and sympathise with Lianne's pain, joy and relief here - I think you have captured her emotions really well.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 19, 2018 9:24:06 GMT 10
I can really feel and sympathise with Lianne's pain, joy and relief here - I think you have captured her emotions really well. Thank you so much for the comment! I really wanted to capture the full range of Lianne's emotions--pain, joy, and relief at finally giving birth to an heir--here which wasn't easy in a single sentence so I'm super happy to hear that you felt I succeeded with that.
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