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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 14, 2018 23:35:44 GMT 10
Title: Rose Bloom
Rating:PG-13 for reference to miscarriage.
Word Count: 35
Summary: Lianne delicately breaks bad news to her husband.
Rose Bloom
“A rose bloomed in my sheets today,” a weeping Lianne whispered into Roald’s shoulder, and he knew that was her delicate way of telling him the unbearable: that they had lost another child before birth.
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Post by Kypriotha on Oct 19, 2018 7:01:08 GMT 10
I really like how you have captured Lianne here - this seems to me to be exactly how she would break such terribly sad news to Roald.
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Post by devilinthedetails on Oct 19, 2018 9:29:09 GMT 10
I really like how you have captured Lianne here - this seems to me to be exactly how she would break such terribly sad news to Roald. Thanks so much for commenting. I spent a lot of time thinking about how Lianne would convey such heartbreaking news to Roald and in the end this just spoke to me in her voice, and it felt very true to her character so I'm super glad that you agree.
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