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Post by Rachy on Mar 15, 2015 18:46:29 GMT 10
Title: Be Careful Rating: PG Word Count: 49 words. Summary: Alanna and George. Risky jobs with risky lives. Comma overuse.
Be careful, they say, in the pause for breath between a kiss, the hesitation, hands clenched, but it rings false when they built their lives on towers of risk, calculated and recognized before they accounted for love and marriage and families and for someone outside of their own skin.
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Post by Kypriotha on Mar 15, 2015 20:02:17 GMT 10
Ooh, nice look at the complications that would underlie Alanna and George's relationship!
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