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Post by mistrali on Mar 24, 2014 9:52:48 GMT 10
Title: Offer Rating and Warnings: PG-13 for implied violence. Word Count: 26 Summary: The unmage is hurt.
The boy lay on the deck coughing up blood, and knew he'd got off lightly; his darkness offered itself, to stop these pirates hurting him more.
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Post by wordy on Mar 24, 2014 11:54:41 GMT 10
I was never very fussed on the unmagic plot, but I think I'm starting to 'get' it. Great sentence!
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Post by mistrali on Mar 24, 2014 13:29:37 GMT 10
Thank you!
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