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Post by ubiquitous on May 18, 2013 21:05:07 GMT 10
Title: Dislike Rating: PG-13 Word Count: 119 Pairing: Alanna/Jonathan Round/Fight: 2A Summary: Jon just wants to be liked. Not sure why I keep doing dialogue, but anyways.
Jon sighs. “She doesn’t like me.”
“She has no reason to,” Alanna retorts. “If I were her, I wouldn’t like you either.”
“I’m not entirely sure you like me anyways,” Jon says wryly.
“Don’t push your luck,” Alanna warns, “I can still put a frog in your bed.”
“You wouldn’t.”
“Try me.”
Jon sighs, sipping the wine in his goblet. “She likes you, doesn’t she? Maybe you could put in a good word for me?”
“I can’t talk to her. By your orders.”
“And we both know you got around that.”
“She doesn’t know that. And maybe that has something to do with why she doesn’t like you.” Alanna glared at Jon before spinning on her heel and leaving.
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Post by housewife on Jun 5, 2013 20:00:49 GMT 10
It makes me so sad that we don't get to see enough Alanna and Kel interaction, so I appreciate Alanna's slightly vicious banter here =D Poor Jon, but I'm not too fussed for his sake (although I do like this approach to how he feels about her)
I have too much to say and you pack a lot into your fics. In short, yay, I enjoyed this one!
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Post by mistrali on Jun 8, 2013 14:20:30 GMT 10
Ooh, well done. You captured the AJ dynamic really well, an this makes me feel sorry for Kel all over again.
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