Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Dec 24, 2012 12:56:24 GMT 10
Title: on this cold night (our bed is still warm) Rating: PG Prompt: #5, winter's warmth Summary: There is a fierce winter's storm on their wedding night. Notes: Two people requested this pairing, so this is for EC and Elsceetaria. Enjoy, lovelies.
The shutters rattled against the cold wind, icy pellets of snow barraging the panes. The wind entered the room with every gust, over the presents half-opened on the table and floor. It passed by the fireplace, stirring the ashes of the fire that had been left to gutter and go out over the course of the night.
The room was cold, the servants having abandoned it for this evening, leaving its occupants to their privacy.
The bed was warm, Neal pressed against Yuki’s back as he whispered some poetry into her ear, his breath on her cheek and the ridiculous sweetness of his words making her turn her head to giggle into her pillow.
Neal smiled and pressed a kiss to his new bride’s neck. Yuki turned her head swiftly, catching her new husband’s lips with her own.
The wind rattled the shutters and the room cooled against its onslaught, but the chill didn't reach their bed.
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Post by Tamari on Dec 24, 2012 12:58:46 GMT 10
The bed was warm, Neal pressed against Yuki’s back as he whispered some poetry into her ear, his breath on her cheek and the ridiculous sweetness of his words making her turn her head to giggle into her pillow. D'AWW. This is adorable. It's short and sweet and, as always, your wonderful, evocative writing steals the show.
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Dec 24, 2012 12:59:40 GMT 10
Tamari! *blushes* You are so nice to me. I am glad you liked it!
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Griff
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Post by Griff on Dec 25, 2012 6:40:44 GMT 10
I just love how warm and snuggly this is! Perfect for winter.
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Elsceetaria
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Post by Elsceetaria on Dec 26, 2012 7:31:30 GMT 10
This is amazing. It's lovely and sweet and amazing.
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Dec 26, 2012 9:00:14 GMT 10
Griff: Thank you! The prompt was perfect for that contrast between warmth and cold, no? Elsceetaria: I am so glad you liked it! You are amazing for reviewing.
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hawksandfeathers
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Post by hawksandfeathers on Dec 26, 2012 9:01:27 GMT 10
Oh Kris! This is everything I ever wanted in a N/Y fic! Sweet, poetic... as I mentioned before, battles of wits with Neal are awesome, but sometimes Yuki doesn't belong in that picture. Ohhh, you just inspired me! I'm gonna go write some N/Y now (for you)
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Dec 26, 2012 11:49:22 GMT 10
Oh Kris! This is everything I ever wanted in a N/Y fic! Sweet, poetic... as I mentioned before, battles of wits with Neal are awesome, but sometimes Yuki doesn't belong in that picture. Ohhh, you just inspired me! I'm gonna go write some N/Y now (for you) Yes! Ok! Oh, I am very glad you liked it. I haven't written them before so I was just playing with their interactions.
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