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Post by Kris11 on Nov 1, 2012 13:58:40 GMT 10
Title: Condemned Rating : PG-13 Word Count: 156 Summary (and any Warnings): Notes: This is also for the Halloween drabble challenge on TPE, with the prompt 'condemned'. Because, hey, this kind of creeped me out even as I was writing it, and Roger is technically a corpse. It counts.
Thom sat quietly, knowing that Roger was nearby in the darkness, that the other sorcerer watched him when Thom thought he was alone.
Everything had gotten so out of his control, an admission that Thom could hardly bear to make, even to himself. He had wanted to prove that he was worth something, that he had something to be proud of. After a childhood where his father refused to even look at him, let alone acknowledge him as a worthy son, this desire was rooted deep. He had gone to the City of the Gods with the intention of being the best, and damn the consequences.
Now, with the dead man he had thought to control standing behind him, a hand lightly pressing the back of his neck, Thom admitted to himself that he had condemned himself to this fate.
Roger slid his hands to his shoulders, his throat. Thom closed his eyes.
Forgive me, Alanna.
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Post by Alliecat on Nov 1, 2012 16:37:08 GMT 10
Oh wow, this is so powerful. Creepy, but you did creepy very well.
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Post by Tamari on Nov 2, 2012 2:14:24 GMT 10
Not what I expected, but definitely creepy, in a strangely wonderful kind of way. Roger works so well for scary fics, doesn't he?
(P.S. Might want to change the rating to PG-13, not T.)
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Post by wordy on Nov 2, 2012 10:36:46 GMT 10
oooh, I do love Thom!fics, and this is wonderfully creepy.
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Nov 3, 2012 10:53:20 GMT 10
Thanks for the reviews, guys! (And you're right, Tamari. Thanks)
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Post by ubiquitous on Nov 4, 2012 10:59:45 GMT 10
Fabulously creepy! Great fic!
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Nov 4, 2012 13:32:46 GMT 10
Thanks, Isha!
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