Post by Tamari on Aug 3, 2012 13:49:54 GMT 10
Title: Swirls in the Rock
Rating: PG-13
Team: Emelan
Prompt: A whisper from the edge
Word Count: 204
Summary (and any Warnings): She’s needing more and more just to feel alive. Rated for an undertone of suicide, but nothing concrete.
She teeters.
A step forward, two back, and she’s dancing on the jagged top of the cliff, each twirl more dangerous and heart-pounding than anything even Pasco has tried.
She can see trees below her, miles and miles away or maybe just a step down. That might be Tris tugging in her mind, or even Daja, the tug becoming more insistent as the wind starts to sing around her knees.
Briar is the one to break through. SANDRY! he screams through their minds. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Living, she says, and laughs frantically as her slippers kicks off a chunk of rock that spirals down, down, down.
ARE YOU CRAZY?
Perhaps she is, but that’s two steps back and she’s already at the edge.
No, she says.
She waits for him to send her a thought but does not cease her dancing, feverish and desperate. Her feet weave patterns in the dust and rocks, and she teeters.
Don’t hurt yourself because of me, he says at last, his mind-voice coming through in a hoarse whisper.
She would like to say something dramatic here, like that her foot slips for a moment, or that she skids over the edge.
In reality, she just walks away.
Rating: PG-13
Team: Emelan
Prompt: A whisper from the edge
Word Count: 204
Summary (and any Warnings): She’s needing more and more just to feel alive. Rated for an undertone of suicide, but nothing concrete.
She teeters.
A step forward, two back, and she’s dancing on the jagged top of the cliff, each twirl more dangerous and heart-pounding than anything even Pasco has tried.
She can see trees below her, miles and miles away or maybe just a step down. That might be Tris tugging in her mind, or even Daja, the tug becoming more insistent as the wind starts to sing around her knees.
Briar is the one to break through. SANDRY! he screams through their minds. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Living, she says, and laughs frantically as her slippers kicks off a chunk of rock that spirals down, down, down.
ARE YOU CRAZY?
Perhaps she is, but that’s two steps back and she’s already at the edge.
No, she says.
She waits for him to send her a thought but does not cease her dancing, feverish and desperate. Her feet weave patterns in the dust and rocks, and she teeters.
Don’t hurt yourself because of me, he says at last, his mind-voice coming through in a hoarse whisper.
She would like to say something dramatic here, like that her foot slips for a moment, or that she skids over the edge.
In reality, she just walks away.
Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!