SSSP: The Distant Hill, G (Freedom)

[Tamari]

Series: Of Freedom
Title: The Distant Hill
Rating: G
Event: Single Sentence Shotput
Words: 34
Summary: She's always been overlooked.

The Distant Hill

When the civil war begins, Lianne cries like the world will drown, and all Lerant can do is hold her and pray that someone will look after her while he's gone; no one does.

[wordy]

Ooh, this is gorgeous, and I love how you used the semi-colon! Fantastic sentence.

[Alliecat]

Ooh, this is very touching! Very sweet, but so sad.

[Tamari]

Thank you both!

[Muse]

This is so heartwrenching-- "like the world will drown" = owwwwww.