kiz
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Post by kiz on May 2, 2012 3:36:12 GMT 10
Series: Draig Title: Rotten to the Core Rating: PG Event: Single Sentence Shot Put Words: 29 Summary: Liam does not like surprises.
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Roger of Conte was manipulative and self absorbed, but Liam had never considered the duke cruel until that (baffling, stricken) morning when he had awakened, and Roger was gone.
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Post by indifferentred on May 2, 2012 4:17:23 GMT 10
Ooh, love the premise for this! So sweet and poignant, and I really feel for Liam at the end of this fic.
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on May 3, 2012 1:52:58 GMT 10
Ah- I like this. Very interesting. I didn't see that coming with the title and summary at all, which made it very effective. Excellent use of the one sentence to tell a complete story.
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Griff
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Post by Griff on May 3, 2012 6:02:58 GMT 10
>.> <.<
*pets Roger*
Yup, sounds like him.
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Moony
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Post by Moony on May 3, 2012 8:11:25 GMT 10
This is fantastic. It really does give an entire story in just that one line.
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Post by Kypriotha on May 3, 2012 18:52:21 GMT 10
Aww, poor Liam You've captured so much of his emotions in just that one sentence.
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Post by Tamari on May 29, 2012 13:13:08 GMT 10
This is lovely! Am I getting some Liam/Roger here? ;D
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