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Post by Rachy on May 1, 2012 15:08:17 GMT 10
Series: Imperial
Title: A Place to Think
Rating: G
Event: Single Sentence Shot-Put
Word Count: 32 words.
Summary: 'This too shall pass' for a new Emperor.
He visits the grounds of the former menagerie to think, surrounded by ruins and rats and dying weeds and reminds himself that his fumbling decisions and childish steps could be far worse.
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Elsceetaria
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Post by Elsceetaria on May 1, 2012 15:12:58 GMT 10
Aw, this is lovely and wonderful.
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Griff
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Post by Griff on May 1, 2012 15:14:28 GMT 10
"After Ozorne, the only place left is up."?
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on May 3, 2012 6:29:27 GMT 10
Perfect! Especially since it is so short, the descriptions and emotions here are extremely well done. I love what you imply he is thinking and feeling, rather than spelling it all out to us. Lovely piece.
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Post by Kypriotha on May 3, 2012 18:29:31 GMT 10
What a lovely look into Kaddar's thoughts in the aftermath of EM! I love your Kaddar  |
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Post by Rachy on May 3, 2012 20:40:05 GMT 10
Thank you all!  @griff: I thought of it more as well, I could tear down the palace like Daine, but I won't. Ozorne works too though! @kyp: Thankyou! Hopefully that sets me in good stead for the rest of the series |
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Muse
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Post by Muse on May 29, 2012 13:07:17 GMT 10
I love the atmosphere that you created here; it's very Kaddar-like to think this way.
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Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!