Muse
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Post by Muse on May 26, 2012 11:11:09 GMT 10
****THIS FIC CONTAINS MAJOR MASTIFF PLOT POINTS****
Series: Strong [#4]
Title: Tenacious
Rating: PG
Event: Single Sentence Shot Put
Word Count: 45
Summary: Gareth tries to understand something he hasn't ever felt.
Warnings: Mastiff Spoilers...
The dust spinners don’t (can’t, won’t) speak to Gareth like they do to Beka, but he still dribbles sand through his fingers and feels their winds kick up, running like fingers through his hair while he wonders if this is what Beka (freedom) feels like.
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Ankhiale
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Post by Ankhiale on May 26, 2012 11:13:02 GMT 10
Ooh.  's sad, but I love the pretty image I get. There's almost, hm, a child's courtesy here, the way he interacts with the spinners. |
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Post by Tamari on May 26, 2012 11:13:26 GMT 10
Your parentheses, your parentheses. -simultaneously laughing and crying- But really, I love you (r writing), Muse. So much for one sentence, and UH. FANTABULOUS.
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Griff
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Post by Griff on May 27, 2012 18:07:31 GMT 10
Gareth, you just sit there and poke at them more. I promise, one day, they'll do what you want. Or you'll meet Tris, and that would be the best crossover EVERY.
I hate you, Muse. Tris/Gareth, look what you've made me do.
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Muse
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Post by Muse on May 29, 2012 14:07:31 GMT 10
Oh, you guys are the best!
@alix: Yeah, I totally know what you mean; he's got this very polite little 8 year old/9year olf thing going on here...
@t-chan: I really love you too! And I'm really happy that you liked the parentheses (I was really proud of those)
@griff: I make you do terrible things *nods*
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Post by Seek on Apr 29, 2013 4:29:25 GMT 10
I have to say this, and something I've noticed--I really love the way Gareth associates Beka with freedom. It shows not just in this fics, but in the other fics. And it's just as interesting that his freedom later becomes tied up with Beka's daughter.
Great job, Muse!
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Maybe once we'd have seen it during Smackdown!