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Post by Katty on May 6, 2012 17:10:15 GMT 10
Series: Altitude Title: Axis Rating: G Event: 100 Word Dash Words: 100 Couple: Vania/Zahir Summary: Zahir is unimpressed with her behaviour.
Zahir stepped into the garden and cleared his throat.
Two teenagers, who had been wrapped in each other only a moment before, sprung apart. The boy – a squire Zahir faintly recognised, of some minor fief – stumbled backwards.
Zahir stepped forwards so he was towering over the boy and glared down at him. “Leave. Now.” He ordered menacingly. The squire needed no further encouragement and fled.
Vania straightened her dress. “You spoil all my fun,” she huffed. “You can’t tell me what to do.”
“I can’t.” Zahir agreed coolly. “But I can try to stop you making a fool of yourself.”
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Post by Kypriotha on May 6, 2012 17:42:20 GMT 10
Ooh, I like Zahir here - both when he's being menacing and when he's coolly telling Vania she's being a fool. Nice dynamics for their relationship
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Post by kiz on May 7, 2012 10:25:54 GMT 10
Man, Zahir is so hot. I love this setup of him and Vania -- you can practically see the sparks between them fly off the page (screen? whatever). Well done, I can't wait to read more of these two!
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Post by Moony on May 10, 2012 5:06:16 GMT 10
I love how these two have such different expressions of very similar characteristics. I can't wait to read more!
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