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Post by kiz on Aug 31, 2011 5:00:16 GMT 10
Title: Soft Metals Rating: R Word Count: 190 Card: Summer Bingo: fresh + cotton + lazy afternoon + friends + fruit Summary: Delia and Josiane beat the heat AN: I thought I’d kick off bingo with my favorite girls! This kind of just turned into total smut though. What can I say? Summer is a sexy season!
Late afternoon and the heat stretches on, and Delia is languorous with it as she breathes in the wafting scents of sun warmed herbs and summer fruits, as she twines one careless hand through Josiane’s wheat blonde hair. She leans forward to press a kiss, sweet and deliberate, at the base of the Copper Islander’s slender neck.
Josiane shivers. Her skin tastes like salt and berries and soft metals. Clad as she is in only a thin cotton shift, Delia can visibly see her tremble, and it is intoxicating.
“Hold still,” Delia whispers, and she reaches for an ewer of water, cool and fresh. She pours it over Josiane, rendering her shift translucent, and the princess gasps from shock of it, gasps again as Delia trails in the water’s wake with hands and lips and tongue, tearing through the soaked fabric as though it were the flimsiest of tissues.
Friend, lover, rival...Delia learns and learns Josiane anew in the shape of every curve and fold even as Josiane sighs and writhes and begs to be plundered. Delia acquiesces: She was never one to turn down a victory freely proffered.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2011 7:19:46 GMT 10
*Is speechless* I love how you used the senses: the pictures are gorgeous, I can feel the tastes on my tongue, and then the sensation of water... simply amazing. And sexy.
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Post by Rosie on Aug 31, 2011 18:39:35 GMT 10
Totally agree with rosa - the sensuality in this piece is gorgeous. You always have such a great turn of phrase as well.
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Post by journeycat on Sept 1, 2011 12:58:17 GMT 10
Summer is a sexy season indeed, and so is this fic. Delicious piece!
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