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Post by wordy on Oct 10, 2011 15:27:26 GMT 10
Title: Clear Rating: PG Summary: An unlikely couple.
The arch of her foot fits into the curl of his hand, and he’s used to the shallow crackle of electricity now, the way the hair on his arms stands on end with every touch. She motions him away, irritably—I’m trying to study, Briar—but he’s known her long enough to look for that small quirk of her lips, for the smile that isn’t there. All of his other girls had been different, predictable. Tris doesn’t care about clever or funny, or at least pretends that she doesn’t. She only cares that it’s him, and that’s what makes him reach across and put a palm flat on the page she was reading, lean in to kiss her, gently, until he can finally feel her smile.
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Post by Rachy on Oct 10, 2011 20:35:14 GMT 10
This has a gorgeous imagery to it, and you've captured them really well too, especially in such a short piece .
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Post by Kypriotha on Oct 10, 2011 21:51:44 GMT 10
Awww! Before Circle Opens I always thought these two would make such a cute couple and even though I know it's impossible in canon, it's still nice to see what could have been You've captured their dynamic beautifully, especially how he's always been able to see past her deceptions and how she is different to all his other girls.
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Post by wordy on Oct 11, 2011 12:36:23 GMT 10
Thanks guys! I agree, Tris and Briar could have been very sweet together.
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Post by ubiquitous on Oct 13, 2011 21:36:09 GMT 10
Aww, this is so sweet! A lovely ficlet!
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