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Post by journeycat on Jul 1, 2011 13:56:21 GMT 10
Title: Three Little Words Rating: G Couple/Character: Kel/Faleron Event: 110 word hurdles Word Count: 110 Summary: Three little words make Kel's heart sing.
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I love you.
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three
little words that made her heart flutter sweetly and seemed to make her arms go around his neck of their own volition. He said it often, in front of friends and family and strangers, and it never seemed to lose its meaning; she could see the truth in his soft dark eyes, feel it in his rough dark hands.
I love you, too, husband, she would say back, and it warmed her all over to see how his eyes shined.
There was no greater gift than knowing that she could make him glow as brightly as the unwavering flame he lit within her heart.
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luinae
Rider Trainee
crazy girl
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Post by luinae on Jul 1, 2011 13:59:03 GMT 10
Awwww, this is such sweet and fluffy goodness. They would be so happy together.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 1, 2011 14:00:44 GMT 10
I'd like to think so! ^__^ Thanks!
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Post by Shhasow on Jul 1, 2011 14:22:47 GMT 10
I am drowning in all the lovely fluff. I consider it a sweet death. A very very sweet death.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 1, 2011 14:31:39 GMT 10
Who doesn't like drowning in cotton candy? ;D Thank you!
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sidonie
Soldier
lunatic, lover, and poet
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Post by sidonie on Jul 2, 2011 1:12:50 GMT 10
Eee! Such a perfectly contained bit of fluff. I love how normal and happy and in love they are.
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Post by Seek on Jul 2, 2011 3:58:10 GMT 10
I love the way you did the fluff - there's a very tight sense of control to this. It's like...I don't know, a love poem, given the very neat way you've picked words here
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Post by journeycat on Jul 5, 2011 10:18:09 GMT 10
Wow, thanks so much! <3
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Post by Lisa on Jul 5, 2011 21:27:11 GMT 10
^____^ So fluffy. It's adorable.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 6, 2011 4:25:26 GMT 10
Thank you, Lisa!
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Moony
Squire
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Post by Moony on Jul 6, 2011 14:35:35 GMT 10
These two are just so adorable! I love how sweet and untroubled they are <3
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jul 7, 2011 10:09:19 GMT 10
I'm with Nat, drowning in sugary-syrupy-stuff and loving it.
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Muse
Knight
Official Rogerfic Curator
Junior Overlord
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Post by Muse on Jul 8, 2011 1:19:11 GMT 10
*joins in with the drowning* It's just so...true. It's not overdone or understated but just a bit matter-of-fact without being dull. It's wonderful!
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