Griff
Knight
Deputy Mischief Maker
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Post by Griff on Jul 1, 2011 13:48:36 GMT 10
Title: Study of Want Rating: PG Couple/Character: Jonathan/George Event: 110 word hurdle Words: 110 Summary: For Jonathan, being along with George is a study of want. -
It was in the quiet comfort of his study, where they'd share the sheaf of papers, that it began. The lick of air tickling the nape of his neck as the hardened hands leaned over his tight shoulder and pulled one sheet away from the others. The heat would last long after he was alone again, nothing but the troubling memories of green eyes shuttered in sharp focus to chase the want from his finger tips. As king, as a husband, he could never entertaining the idea of turning and touching. As a friend, he could never betray that trust. But, as a man, there was little else he wanted.
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luinae
Rider Trainee
crazy girl
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Post by luinae on Jul 1, 2011 13:51:22 GMT 10
Loving the idea of all the different roles that Jon has to play. Especially, how unwilling he is to break the trust. It's very aching and melancholy.
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sidonie
Soldier
lunatic, lover, and poet
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Post by sidonie on Jul 1, 2011 14:00:16 GMT 10
Ooh, beautiful! Jon's sense of duty is perfectly done here.
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Post by journeycat on Jul 1, 2011 14:36:48 GMT 10
This is both prettily sad and...totally hot. It's such a lovely combination!
I also love your description in this, how Jon is so attuned to the smallest detail.
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Griff
Knight
Deputy Mischief Maker
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Post by Griff on Jul 1, 2011 17:25:50 GMT 10
Luinae - This is Jon. *holds up picture* this is Jon when all his bits are taken apart *tosses confetti*
sidonie - Jon, you're your own cockblocker. *pats him*
Mandi - LOL. >.> I can totally dig that reaction.
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Jul 7, 2011 11:18:49 GMT 10
Poor Jon. This is incredibly real.
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