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Post by rougelioness on Mar 8, 2011 10:37:21 GMT 10
Title: Bloemen (flowers) (Driehoek (triangle) series) Rating: PG Word Count: 162 Pairing: Dom/Evin/Kel Round/Fight: R1 A Summary: Flowers represent feelings, and both warriors need to show their true feelings.
For a week after 'the swimming accident', Kel spent much more time avoiding Dom and Evin then she would have liked. They both spent a lot of time running into each other searching for her. Or so they both claimed. She never knew exactly what had spurred this turn of events and attitudes but she was determined not to give in to their foolish behavior, even as she wondered what it was all about. She found flowers on her doorstep every time she left and came back, never with a note- but she could always tell which they were from. Dom always got lilacs and lilies for they were her favorite, and Evin always got her red roses for they symbolized love. What no one else seemed to notice was Evin suddenly had carnations lining his window sill, his favorite in various colors, and Dom suddenly had red roses tucked into the corners of his room and the bottom of his travel bags.
QC by: journeycat
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Mar 8, 2011 10:57:17 GMT 10
So heartwarming!
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Post by rougelioness on Mar 8, 2011 10:58:09 GMT 10
thanks hopefully there will be more to come.
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Post by wordy on Mar 10, 2011 8:36:45 GMT 10
Your story has been excluded as it does not comply with SMACKDOWN quality rules. This means it does not currently count towards your couple's fight total.
Issue: The first sentence is confusing. Just get someone to read it for you, perhaps.
Moderator: wordy
Please fix the issue and post on the validation thread to have the entry reinstated and the exclusion removed. You have until the close of the fight to fix the issue.
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Post by pandora on Mar 25, 2011 10:17:55 GMT 10
This is very sweet, can't wait to read the rest
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