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Post by pandora on Mar 13, 2011 8:54:46 GMT 10
Title: Food Rating: G Word Count: 124 Pairing: Dom/Evin Round/Fight: 1/A Summary: The King has decided that he needs the Own and Riders to get along better, and decides that making them share a mess hall is a good way to start…
“Bad idea Jon,” Raoul mutters as the King’s Own and the Queen’s Riders pour into the new shared mess hall. “Bad, bad idea.”
On the first day, Evin is hit in the back of the leg with an apple. He falls hard, straight into his bowl of beef stew. He knows it is Dom, but decides to wait for the right moment to get his vengeance.
The following day, Evin sits at the table closest to the door, waiting for Dom to arrive. As he walks past Evin attacks. With a blood curdling cry Evin dives over the table, tackling Dom and proceeding to rub cheesecake in his face.
On the third day the Riders and Own are returned to their respective mess halls.
QC by: Cassandra
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domluvr
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Post by domluvr on Mar 21, 2011 13:06:34 GMT 10
LOL! I love the structure of this. And the last sentence = priceless.
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Post by pandora on Mar 21, 2011 13:39:50 GMT 10
This was supposed to be longer... it was the second last one I wrote at the end of round 1 But I'm glad you liked it!
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Kris11
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Shipping in Circles
I am so confused when did I change my name
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Post by Kris11 on Apr 3, 2011 13:00:03 GMT 10
The image of a man launching himself through the air, screaming, with a piece of cheesecake in hand is beyond priceless. It worked being simple; we can imagine Raoul's gloating.
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