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Post by Echoing Dreams on Apr 23, 2011 2:18:58 GMT 10
Title- Flirtatious Rating- PG Word Count- 186 (Without Info.) Pairing- Dom and Evin Round/Fight- 2/A Summary- Kel and Dom are talking when Evin shows up and flirting commences.
Kel and Dom were sitting in the courtyard, having an innocent conversation about battle tactics, when Evin walked by. He obviously didn’t see Dom at first, for he smiled directly at Kel. “Hey Kel,” he greeted, and started toward her. But, when he spotted Dom, his expression changed completely. With a mischievous smile spreading across his face, his gait turned to a stroll, and he sauntered toward them. “Why, hello hot stuff,” he drawled, giving a flirtatious wave at the man. Kel rolled her eyes, but Dom seemed to glow with joy before his face turned mischievous as well. “Hello to you too, hotter stuff,” he said in a weird voice, batting his eyelashes. Kel just stared at them with a blank expression. The two men continued flirting, and soon began giggling at each other. Kel shook her head and stood. “You two are strange, goodbye,” she said and left. As soon as Kel was gone Evin bent down beside Dom, and gave the man his usual greeting, a warm kiss on the lips. When the two finally broke apart, the were grinning at each other.
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Post by Echoing Dreams on Apr 24, 2011 2:16:38 GMT 10
I'm so sorry! I'll go through and fix it right now! Then do i just delete the stuff from this thread and copy in the new one?
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Post by pandora on Apr 24, 2011 2:25:05 GMT 10
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Post by Echoing Dreams on Apr 24, 2011 2:32:06 GMT 10
Yes, thank you so much! I've gone through and fixed it, so hopefully it's better now. I'm going to post on the validation thread right now. Thank you for the advice and the link!
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