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Post by clairshadows on May 8, 2009 0:27:00 GMT 10
Title: The trouble with women or Two times Daja gets in trouble with women. Rating: PG-13 (sexual themes, femslash) Prompt: Numbers Category: Up to 250 word drabble Word count: 225 Summary: GDT entry. Heat and boredom, a talent with jewelry and a not so subtle seduction. Beta read by the marveleous Rojo and Opalgirl PendantsThe fashion lately has been large, beautifully crafted pendants hung on delicate gold chains. Daja loves gold for its beauty, but most of all for its willingness to do almost anything she asks of it. The shop is swelteringly hot and the kaq in front of her has been dithering over two of Daja’s bracelets for the last half an hour. Leaning on the counter, the woman’s pendant swings out to hover over her ample bosom, and Daja can’t help herself. She asks a link to weaken. Curiosity“What does it feel like?” Laura, a distant cousin of Sandry’s asks. The woman is looking at Daja’s hand where the living metal stretches across the palm and two fingers. Daja hesitates then stretches her hand out between them. “You can touch it if you like,” Daja blushes as she offers. Laura is beautiful with gold blond hair, like Sandry’s, but with a more regal nose and light brown eyes. “I’d love to.” Laura’s fingers are warm and gentle and Daja can’t help the shiver that runs through her. Laura notices and her hand stills. “You know, I’ve heard other rumours,” and Laura’s fingers are deliberate as they stroke across Daja’s palm to her wrist, “maybe you could show me if they’re true?” And Daja looks into the woman's eyes, bright with curiosity, and breathes: “Yes.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on May 8, 2009 11:40:08 GMT 10
This is very pretty! I adore Daja & don't think she gets enough love, so it's nice to run across something like this. Love that she falls for someone who reminds her of Sandry, too, because Daja/Sandry is the one intra-circle pairing I *almost* buy. If I may, I don't think this merits an "Adult" rating -- to me it seems like a PG-13, since there's no nudity or swearing. Edit to clarify: I'm just a message runner & this is just my humble opinion.Anyway, I like.
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Post by clairshadows on May 8, 2009 16:09:05 GMT 10
Noted! I'm used to sex being rated NC-17 and everything else regarding relationships R. I erred on the side of caution. Thankyou for the feedback. Daja's one character I took a while to fall in love with, but the more I reread the books the more interesting a character she becomes.
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Post by Lass on May 9, 2009 8:30:54 GMT 10
Very nice. I like the link asking. Made me smirk some like, "That's my girl." Daja is not my favorite, but I do like her.
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Post by clairshadows on May 10, 2009 0:15:22 GMT 10
Thankyou, I like her too
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Post by ubiquitous on May 12, 2009 22:44:07 GMT 10
Very nicely done!
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Post by Katty on May 12, 2009 23:51:57 GMT 10
Teehee! I love this And I agree, Daja doesn't get enough love!
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Post by clairshadows on May 13, 2009 18:58:04 GMT 10
No she doesn't Thank you for your comments.
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Post by Lisa on May 18, 2009 1:19:49 GMT 10
Yay, Daja-fic!! I like this very much!
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Post by clairshadows on May 18, 2009 8:37:57 GMT 10
Thankyou
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Post by Vala on May 4, 2016 23:26:46 GMT 10
It's great!
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