luinae
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Post by luinae on Mar 11, 2011 10:48:09 GMT 10
Title: Goddess Rating: PG Word Count: 107 Pairing: Lark/Rosethorn Round/Fight: 1/B Summary: Lark thinks that Rosethorn looks like a goddess
Rosethorn looked like a goddess.
It was in how she carried herself- shoulders back, bright hair streaming in the sunlight. It was how she laughed, throwing her head back. It was how she smiled, illuminating even the darkest room. It was how she looked lying on the pillows beside Lark.
Lark always felt happier when Rosethorn was beside her- because she was so bright, so Lark shined brighter. Rosethorn didn’t steal the light for herself- she shared it with others. With Lark.
She always looked like a goddess- a bright creature that wasn’t quite right for the earth. That was, of course, until she opened her mouth.
QC by: journeycat
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Elsceetaria
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May or May Not be a Little Teapot
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Post by Elsceetaria on Mar 11, 2011 11:43:43 GMT 10
The ending is perfection on a stick (because everything is better on a stick).
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Mar 15, 2011 3:16:05 GMT 10
Hahaha! Oh, gutter.
I loved this. Your descriptions through Lark's POV were perfect, and the last line was such a surprise I laughed out loud. Good job.
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luinae
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Post by luinae on Mar 15, 2011 5:50:09 GMT 10
Thanks! I can imagine thinking Rosethorn was beautiful- until she opened her mouth. What sort of goddess threatens to tie people over wells?
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Carbon Kiwi
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Post by Carbon Kiwi on Mar 28, 2011 5:22:32 GMT 10
Hahahaha oh I enjoyed this to no end! The set up is so perfect for the delivery of the last line. Although surely there have to be some surly Goddesses around, to keep all the other Gods and Goddesses in line? (; Love this!
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