CM R1: A Good Start (DoI1), G [QC]

[greenie]

Title: A Good Start (Dogs on Ice 1)
Rating: PG
Word count: 150
Pairing: Clary/Mattes
Round/Fight: 1/D
Summary: This was going to be fun. Set in Verasque’s Dogs on Ice universe.


“But I don’t need to do pairs skating! I like doing solo skating. Why do I have to have a partner? The last one was useless."
“Because it’s good for you and I said so.”
Clary huffed. “Well, where is he?”
Ahuda sighed and looked at her watch. “He’s late.”
“Well, that’s getting off to a good start,” muttered Clary. Just then, she caught sight of a familiar face coming through the doors. “No,” she said. “Not him. He’s Mya’s ex and he’s a total prick and I hate him.”
Ahuda put her hands on her hips. “Listen up, princess, because I’m only saying this once. I’m here to coach you, not to pander to your petty teenage dramas. Got it?”
Mattes had heard the entire exchange while he put his skates on, and looked up to see Clara scowling. He grinned to himself. This was going to be fun.


QC by: journeycat

[Kris11]

Haha! Not something I ever thought I'd see (Mattes on skates?? Noooo), but awesome-ness all the same. I adore Ahuda's response. It was so in character it hurt.

[greenie]

Hee, when Joa (Verasque) first thought it up, I had about 10 seconds of ' Ice skates?', and then I was like 'OMG THAT'S SO AWESOME'. It's super fun to play with.

And lol, when I was writing what Ahuda said I was gleefully grinning to myself. I think dealing with stroppy teenaged Clary would drive her up the wall.

[Elsceetaria]

Coach Ahuda is love. This fic is amazing!

[Verasque]

Mar 18, 2011 9:58:18 GMT 10 greenie said:

“No,” she said.

Hahaha!