sunflower
Message Runner
Flower in the sun.
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Post by sunflower on Mar 17, 2011 16:44:31 GMT 10
Title: Hey, Sexy Lady Rating: PG Word Count: 124 Pairing: Team Scheme (Aly/Taybur) Fight/Round: 1/D Summary: Eh, you da kine, ah?
Nawat and Aly strode into the party on the first anniversary of the queen’s coronation. The children were being taken care of by their nurses, the night was cool and clear, and as Aly sipped her sparkling cider, it seemed that nothing could go wrong. That was when Taybur Sibigat entered, a woman on his arm.
Every head was turned to look at the pair entering the pavilion. The chief subject of their whispers seemed to be the ethereal beauty of Taybur’s partner.
Aly’s husband leaned toward her and asked, “Who is that?”
Loosening up muscles that had become stone the second she had identified the mysterious lady, Aly answered, “His wife.”
The night was hot and stuffy. It seemed nothing could go right.
QC by: greenie
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Post by ev on Mar 18, 2011 7:06:58 GMT 10
Ooh, ouch.
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Kris11
Squire
Shipping in Circles
I am so confused when did I change my name
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Post by Kris11 on Mar 18, 2011 9:24:22 GMT 10
Oww. Well, serves her right. She should remember she is someone's wife, too. Bad Aly. lol. I loved the mirroring of 'nothing could go wrong'/'right' that you did. Very effective.
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