Kris11
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Shipping in Circles
I am so confused when did I change my name
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Post by Kris11 on Mar 15, 2011 15:51:14 GMT 10
Title: Killing Me Rating: PG Word Count: 214 Pairing: Aly/Taybur Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: Taybur can't take watching them together, but neither can he say no.
And I just can’t look; it’s killing me. Mr. Brightside, The Killers.
Their stolen nights never sustained him during the day, and it was always worse when Nawat was home.
At least when her husband was away from the castle, Taybur could pretend that they were staying apart through choice. Though their interactions never hinted at their relationship, he could see it as more of a game than a secret. And at night, it was his bed she would crawl into, keeping him awake until dawn with her kisses and questing hands and gasps.
When Nawat was in Rajmuat, she didn’t dare sneak away for the night. Worse, he watched them together, holding onto his mask of indifference with a control that broke more each time he was forced to endure Nawat’s hand on the small of her back, or the casual way he could kiss her in front of others, or the passion in both of their eyes as a hand lingered on a thigh or waist.
And, in the end, he would always leave. Sneaking out from whatever meeting they were in together, he would go to his rooms alone and swear that this was the last time he would do this to himself.
But then Nawat would leave, and there would be a knock on his door. And he could never say no.
QC by: greenie
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Post by greenie on Mar 15, 2011 16:20:56 GMT 10
Ooh, this is really fascinating! You've written it so well.
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Post by Seek on Mar 15, 2011 18:30:00 GMT 10
Oh man! I love this!
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Emma
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Insane people are always sure that they are fine. Only sane people admit they're crazy.
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Post by Emma on Mar 15, 2011 19:25:04 GMT 10
Your writing is STILL beautiful as always. More please. <3
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sidonie
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lunatic, lover, and poet
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Post by sidonie on Mar 23, 2011 11:20:14 GMT 10
Oh, so sad and sweet. I love this idea, and you executed it beautifully. That it's so painful he has to leave is a beautiful detail.
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