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Post by Cass on Mar 17, 2011 8:43:50 GMT 10
Title: Ordeal Rating: PG Wordcount: 130 Pairing: Kalasin/Wyldon Round: 1C Summary: She comes out of the Chamber dazed.
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Kalasin stumbles out of the Chamber dazed and bruised.
She doesn’t know where all of the bruises have come from, but they pepper her arms and stomach, footprints on her otherwise healthy skin.
Her father’s face is white and clenched, and he is gripping her mother’s hand for a lifeline. He looks like there is barely anything keeping him grounded.
“I’m fine,” she whispers to him, then makes her way to Wyldon. He hands her a skin full of water, cold and bright-tasting in her mouth, and wraps her in a blanket. She hadn’t realized she was shivering.
As she lets Wyldon half-lead her, half-tow her to her rooms, Kalasin considers how glad she is that she is forbidden to speak of what occurred in the Chamber of the Ordeal.
QC by: inthefire
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luinae
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Post by luinae on Mar 17, 2011 9:25:36 GMT 10
Wow, this is crazy good. I love her parents reactions, and how she never wants to speak of what happened in the Chamber again.
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Post by ubiquitous on Mar 17, 2011 10:09:20 GMT 10
Beautifully written. I also like how she doesn't want to speak of her Ordeal.
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Post by Alliecat on Mar 19, 2011 15:20:10 GMT 10
It's getting to be hard to review these because all that's going around in my mind is "Eeeee, loveloveLOVE".
Seriously, I'm so going to fangirl you later.
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Post by Cass on Mar 19, 2011 15:22:26 GMT 10
*huggles you*
We can fangirl each other!
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Post by Lisa on Mar 19, 2011 23:24:17 GMT 10
Ordeal fics are the BEST. (especially if Wyldon's in 'em!)
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