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Post by Lisa on Apr 2, 2011 0:11:25 GMT 10
Title: Decoy Rating: G Word Count: 190 Pairing: Neal/Owen Fight: 1/E Summary: Owen’s on the right path, but barking up the wrong tree.
“You don’t suppose she likes Cleon, do you?” Owen kept turning around to watch the couple they’d left behind near the jousting stands.
Neal pulled him forward again. “Stop gawking at them. Give them privacy.”
“So you think they’re sweethearts,” Owen said, rather than asked. He looked up at Neal with an accusatory expression.
“My telling you the truth of the matter doesn’t mean I’m to blame,” Neal replied coolly.
“I thought you liked her!”
“What?” Neal stopped dead in his tracks, and Owen did, too, just a pace later.
Owen flushed. “You never said anything, but we could all see through your mooning over the prettiest girls to hide your feelings for the person beside you.”
Neal shifted uncomfortably, bothered by how right – and yet how wrong – the younger squire’s words could be. “Yes – oh mighty sleuth,” he replied loftily. “Sir Myles has taught you well – you’ve figured me out completely.”
Owen smirked, just the slightest bit, and began walking. “So you hate it as much as I do,” he said over his shoulder. “At least I’m in good company.”
“The best,” Neal said with a drawn out sigh.
QC by: journeycat
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Post by journeycat on Apr 2, 2011 0:44:06 GMT 10
EEEEEEEEEEEE! I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I love it because it's indirectly Kel-centric, which is something I just can't resist; I love it because Owen and Neal BOTH have crushes on her, which is adorable and totally true; I love it because their banter is just lovely in this. I just love it. ;D
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Post by Rosie on Apr 2, 2011 0:51:02 GMT 10
Oh my, I love that you warped your Neal/Kel canon to give us Neal having a crush on Owen. And much <3 for his final line. Bless him.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 2, 2011 0:54:52 GMT 10
Thanks!!
Thank you - I love that you're so aware of my Kel/Neal canon to recognize when I manipulate it. ;D
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Post by pandora on May 31, 2011 12:17:42 GMT 10
I loved it all, but this line especially!
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Post by Lisa on Jun 1, 2011 10:38:44 GMT 10
Thank you!
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Post by queenscovegirl on Jun 27, 2011 13:59:31 GMT 10
This was so amazing in so many ways! I loved all the Kel/Neal, Owen/Kel, Kel/Cleon, and Neal/Owen going on here, perfect!
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