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Post by sketchymurr on Apr 9, 2011 13:29:05 GMT 10
Title: All The Right Moves Rating: G Word Count: 134 Pairing: Briar/Daja/Sandry/Tris – Team Circlecest Round/Fight: 1/H Summary: Briar has all the right moves, but Daja has something more important- family.
Daja was almost envious of Briar. As she leaned against her forge, sweat pouring down her back from the heat, she stretched. Briar was chatting up another pretty girl, the second today. He really did have all the right moves, and compared to her fumbling, he was a god.
Chiding herself for such blasphemy, Daja returned to her forge. Briar had all the moves, admittedly, but she had other things that mattered more- like the smile that lit Sandry’s face and sparkled in her blue eyes. Picking up a hammer, feeling the comforting hum of warmth and life beneath her hand, Daja wiped her forehead. Between Tris and Sandry’s friendship, and Briar, when he remembered them, Daja had nothing left to want for.
She reminded herself to remember that, and got back to work.
QC by: journeycat
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Kris11
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Post by Kris11 on Apr 9, 2011 13:43:45 GMT 10
Common-sense Daja at her best. You captured her really well and made her believable. Good job!
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Post by sketchymurr on Apr 9, 2011 13:45:27 GMT 10
Thank you!
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