Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Mar 29, 2011 10:30:45 GMT 10
Title:Moment Rating: R Word Count: 171 Pairing: Crane/Rosethorn Round/Fight: 1/F Summary: Crane attempts to be sweet. Succeeds only by accident Warning: Sex. Of the nekkid-straight variety, but it's still happening
“You are—no. I shall say it. You are—”
“—Crane. Stop that. You’ll hurt something. Non-spontaneous compliments are not your—”
“—the impulse was spontaneous, vile woman.”
Rosethorn shifts, taking her small, solid weight from his chest so he might splutter more effectively, and pushes damp hair off her face. “That’s better. “
He reaches up, hands hard on her shoulders, one sliding up along her neck, into her hair.
“If you pull, you man, then I’ll—”
“—richly deserve it.” He grins at her laughter, outraged-yet-open, and lets his grip ease and flatten, so he has the base of her skull cupped in his palm. She leans up into the slow caress, and then down again to kiss him. Her breasts are pressed into him, and their mouths—open-yet-outraged—are in true ease with each other as she traps his lower lip hard enough to make it bleed, while he lets well-cared-for nails score the time into her shoulders and back.
Impulse has always been their joy.
QC by: journeycat
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Post by ubiquitous on Mar 29, 2011 10:48:42 GMT 10
Oh, this is wonderful!
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Post by Verasque on Mar 29, 2011 11:44:27 GMT 10
That last line was simply divine.
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Post by journeycat on Mar 29, 2011 13:07:35 GMT 10
This piece is just so poetic - which is a word that ordinarily wouldn't describe Rosethorn and Crane, but does here, somehow - and you've captured the two of them wonderfully!
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Fate
Squire
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Post by Fate on Mar 29, 2011 14:29:02 GMT 10
What Mandi said! This is beautifully poetic! Love!
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sidonie
Soldier
lunatic, lover, and poet
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Post by sidonie on Mar 30, 2011 6:08:06 GMT 10
*flails* How is this poetic and extraordinarily hot? Lovely. "Vile woman" made me giggle like no other, and the ending is gorgeous. Actually, all of it's gorgeous.
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