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Post by Mirage on Apr 14, 2009 6:03:12 GMT 10
Title: Silver, Instead. Rating: G Prompt: #1 Summary: Somehow, her favourite colour does not match her eyes. Somehow, he makes it okay.
A/N: 100 words. Exactly! For the first time! Ever! I am unbecomingly proud of myself. That said, feel free to point out anything you see (the most pressing issue currently being whether that colon should or should not be there).
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She shouldn’t be ashamed that her favourite colour isn’t the oft-praised Conté blue. Indeed, suffocated by that particular shade all her life, one might even expect it. But too often, Kalasin looks down at the silver trimmings to her sapphire gowns, and thinks bitterly if she should be sidelined all her life – just like the colour she loves.
Hearing her mumbled confession one night, Roald glances down at the colour he wears with pride, then finds the most apt words he can:
“They compliment each other, you know.”
Then he reaches for her hand, and in that she is content.
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Post by boosette on Apr 14, 2009 6:18:35 GMT 10
Oh guys ... ♥
I love Kally and Roald being all siblingy and happy and stuff. Good drabble! (yay 100 words!)
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Post by Anaroriel on Apr 14, 2009 7:07:05 GMT 10
This is just adorable. You've made me into a little happy melting puddle of Ana-ness. Great work and congrats on 100 words!
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Post by ubiquitous on Apr 14, 2009 8:52:00 GMT 10
Aww...this is so sweet. Wonderful little drabble. And congrats on 100 words!
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Post by zbilja on Apr 14, 2009 12:24:45 GMT 10
Very sweet! I love drabbles like this...
And well done on the 100-words-perfect!
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Post by Katty on Apr 14, 2009 14:38:22 GMT 10
Aww Roald and Kally are so sweet in this!
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Post by samantha on Apr 15, 2009 9:41:44 GMT 10
I like it. And I like it even more because my favourite colour is silver.
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Post by k4writer02 on Apr 15, 2009 11:59:33 GMT 10
I love Roald and Kally, and complementing each other. Just lovely siblings and color images.
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Post by Mirage on Apr 16, 2009 12:25:34 GMT 10
Thank you all, reading these comments just brought back some of the 100-word high ;D
[Samantha: Me too! Well, green and silver]
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