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Post by Deleted on May 29, 2011 8:39:34 GMT 10
Title: Carbon Rating: R Word Count: 141 Pairing: Circlecest Round/Fight: 4/A Summary: Daja, Tris and the earth beneath. Sex. Note: No, I have not run out of ideas, what are you talking about?
The earth clinging to the tips of her fingers was as dark as Daja's skin, but so much rougher when she clawed at it, sighs spilling out without her consent.
"You sound like you enjoyed that," Daja murmured, and Tris's breath hitched.
Beneath the palms of her hands, beneath her skin and hair, Tris felt the earth beginning to move; it creaked in protest. Diamond, dirt, the coal deep beneath...
"Wait," she muttered, fighting for control, to shut out Briar, who had to be searching for the source of his brand new kiwifruit vines' complaints. The edge of his thoughts brushed her mind -- before Sandry's presence jerked him away. 'Thanks.'
Daja's chuckle did funny things to her stomach. "I do not think she was doing that for us."
Tris's pale hands touched Daja's brass-covered ones. "I don't think it matters."
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Post by Carbon Kiwi on May 30, 2011 8:00:14 GMT 10
First: I just saw a story titled 'carbon' and thought well, maybe someone wrote a story about Briar and life. Then I saw one called 'Peroxide' and my eyebrow skyrocketed. I saw the others, the pattern and immediately clicked my story. alkjsdlkjasdf you are the best person ever.
The earth clinging to the tips of her fingers was as dark as Daja's skin, but so much rougher when she clawed at it, sighs spilling out without her consent. This killed me dead. Immediately. First line. Score for you!
...and Tris's breath hitched. AAAAAH. *Runs around.* I love that I didn't know it was Tris and then I did and lasjdlfkjasdf.
"Wait," she muttered, fighting for control, to shut out Briar, who had to be searching for the source of his brand new kiwifruit vines' complaints. Ahahahaha I just died laughing. You are the most amazing, I can't even. I'm also a plant geek, so this is amazing on multiple levels. Thank you so much.
Daja's chuckle did funny things to her stomach. I think I know the feeling. Also, I have such a thing for Daja's brass-covered hand.
Thank you for this! See, I was writing all my ship stories at the same time and I was actually most nervous about writing Tris, so I thought I would start with a character I felt least comfortable with and a female character I was comfortable with (Daja), because that would even me out (as I'm used to femslash). I thought through this process that I was pretty egalitarian in my Circlecest shippage (which only started during this final!); indeed, I do love all of them in ships or in a giant ship together.
But this has also let me realise that I have a huge fondness for Daja/Tris; they had more to work through as far as prejudice (Trader-Merchant). And Tris' snark with Daja's calm cleverness.
SO MUCH LOVE FOR YOU OH MY GOODNESS THANK YOU.
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Post by Deleted on May 30, 2011 16:32:30 GMT 10
The prompts may or may not be placation for being busy with exams so not participating enough. Does this mean I get a Best Person Ever award I'm so glad you like it! Before participating in L/R, and then BDST, I'd never even written femmslash before. I'm surprising myself with how much I like writing romance in general, though. Yeah, the kiwifruit, it was either include the vines or include the flightless brown bird, and I didn't think a species indigenous to a set of islands at the bottom of the world would have made it to Emelan. I'm glad you enjoyed the reference, though.
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