Griff
Knight
Deputy Mischief Maker
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Post by Griff on Jun 9, 2011 13:54:59 GMT 10
Title: Shadows Rating: G Word Count: 9 Summary (and any Warnings): Sense memory. Notes: Part of a Fal/Mer set that's entirely Journeycat's fault. Yeah, Mandi. I'm blaming you. -
When Merric closes his eyes, he smells the dead.
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Post by journeycat on Jun 10, 2011 0:20:00 GMT 10
Eek. Poor Merric!
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Post by infinite on Jun 10, 2011 1:01:26 GMT 10
Mandi, why would you DO this to Merric? Seriously though, this is a wonderful sentence, Griff. The starkness of the statement makes it that much more vivid.
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Moony
Squire
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Post by Moony on Jun 10, 2011 10:07:24 GMT 10
It is rather vivid. I can see him putting up a tough front but secretly being haunted by battle.
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