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Post by Cass on Jun 10, 2011 10:30:26 GMT 10
Title: The Body Rating: PG Wordcount: 22 Summary: He didn't know what to expect.
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Burchard awaited his son's triumphant exit from the Chamber, but when the door opened there was nothing there-- not even a body.
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Moony
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Post by Moony on Jun 10, 2011 10:40:18 GMT 10
Oh, I love this take. Somehow this seems even more fitting. It puts a whole new spin on how Raoul's advise to "bury your son" would be taken.
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Post by knightmistress on Jun 10, 2011 10:41:00 GMT 10
I wonder where his body is. Nice job.
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Post by journeycat on Jun 10, 2011 11:46:44 GMT 10
Yikes. This makes me understand that scene in Squire in which he just wants to find someone to blame for his son's death.
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