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Post by wordy on Jan 8, 2010 18:12:21 GMT 10
Title: Meet Me Halfway Rating: PG Prompt: #19 Beginning Summary: The part we didn't get to see in Squire.
"Raoul, I think you've had too much to drink," Buri said softly, pressing her hands up against his chest. It was the drink, and her wearing this dress. That was all. But the fluttering feeling in her stomach didn't go away, and when he looked down at her - dark eyes sad and probing and more sober than she could handle - the hard exterior that she had clung to for so many years seemed to fall to pieces. When he leaned toward her slowly, giving her plenty of time to turn away if she wished to, she felt it was only natural to meet his lips halfway.
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Post by jazzyjess on Jan 8, 2010 18:23:49 GMT 10
Lovely! I love everything Raoul-related, and this was one part I really, really wish Kel had witnessed so that the readers could witness it too! Thank you for giving it justice!
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Post by wordy on Jan 8, 2010 18:33:34 GMT 10
Thanks! Glad you like
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Post by Rachy on Jan 8, 2010 21:10:08 GMT 10
Lovely. I love that she's trying to make excuses by blaming it on wearing a dress.
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Post by Verasque on Jan 8, 2010 22:38:31 GMT 10
Thank you for finally revealing this most intimate scene in an almost tender manner
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Post by Lisa on Jan 8, 2010 22:44:22 GMT 10
I love the way this was written... anything from Buri's POV is a great thing!
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Post by ubiquitous on Jan 9, 2010 14:20:46 GMT 10
Oh, this is lovely!
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Post by wordy on Jan 9, 2010 16:26:34 GMT 10
Thanks guys! ;D
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