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Post by Shhasow on Jun 9, 2011 12:23:59 GMT 10
Title: Pride Rating: G Word Count: 11 Summary: Joren is uneasy.
Though he’ll never admit it, Joren is terrified of the Ordeal.
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 9, 2011 12:26:27 GMT 10
*squee* Love it!!
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Post by wordy on Jun 9, 2011 12:56:54 GMT 10
A perfect sentence!
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Post by journeycat on Jun 9, 2011 12:57:11 GMT 10
Oooooh, this is so intriguing! I feel like you've given a whole new dimension to him with just a couple words.
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Griff
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Post by Griff on Jun 10, 2011 18:48:01 GMT 10
I'm torn between going 'Oooo, foreshadowing' or just hugging the uppity little meister for being rightly concerned.
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Post by Moony on Jun 10, 2011 22:43:24 GMT 10
I like how different a view of him this is, as he is usually so uptight and "perfect" in his own mind. Also, I agree with the darkest bit of Foreshadowing.
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