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Post by Verasque on May 27, 2011 23:48:28 GMT 10
Title: Violet Rating: G Prompt: 33 Ambition Summary: Alanna shows him how to dream. Notes: Part III of All The King’s Men. Part I and Part II. Alanna shows him how to dream. Of a Tortall they have yet to see, of the thrill of first love, of the destiny he can still create. Alan is dutiful and sulky in the presence of the Court, but among their friends and themselves alone, Alan -- Alanna -- turns bold and unguarded. She hides frogs in Jon’s pillow and fires snowballs at his back. “I’ll miss this when I leave,” she confesses, and studies the melting snow in her palm. “But I know it will be worth it when I ride on the battlefield, a knight, flying your standard. I’ll remember this feeling then.” “Don’t forget.” “Never.” She quirks him a grin in promise and lobs a handful of snow into his face. Laughing, she dashes off and prompts him to admire the beauty of rich violet. To recognise the bearing of real power in ordinary people. And to value, above all, the colour of equality.
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Post by Moony on Jun 5, 2011 12:10:08 GMT 10
The last line is priceless. I like how he sees Alanna, especially while it is all innocents and interest.
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Muse
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Post by Muse on Jun 12, 2011 13:35:29 GMT 10
Wow-- their conversation is so "them"! Its interesting to see their friendship through Jon's eyes, especially before she heads off to do great deeds and before he becomes King. I loved it!
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Post by greenie on Jun 28, 2011 14:02:52 GMT 10
This is so beautiful, Joa! I adore it.
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