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Post by Katty on Apr 7, 2009 23:12:44 GMT 10
Title: Rosierocks, or more accurately, Past Rating: G Summary: Lerant tries to escape a childhood memory - - - He barely remembers his aunt. Mostly he just remembers a swish of emerald skirts and flashing jewels. Light, throaty laughter. An easy smile. To this motherless three-year-old boy, she was his world. He doesn’t acknowledge it, but there is a faint memory, tucked in the depths of his mind. A memory of being scooped up and twirled round. Kissed on the forehead. A quiet promise that when she was Queen, she would dress him in silks and diamonds, and make him her Prince. What Lerant does remember, is the day the soldiers came and arrested the Eldorne men for treason.
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Post by Rosie on Apr 7, 2009 23:29:02 GMT 10
<3 Truest title there ever was. You set up the conflict here beautifully, as ever. You might be a little bit awesome, but don't let anybody else know I think so
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Post by Katty on Apr 7, 2009 23:39:48 GMT 10
<3
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Post by rainstormamaya on Apr 8, 2009 8:47:44 GMT 10
Ooh, I love this take on Lerant's relationship with his aunt!
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Post by k4writer02 on Apr 8, 2009 11:47:48 GMT 10
Ooh, I like this! Delia would be a swooping presence in a young nephew's life, lavish with promises. That contrasted with the arrests--chilling. This rocks!
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Post by ubiquitous on Apr 8, 2009 13:10:47 GMT 10
This is great!! The Delia/Lerant interaction is just wonderful too! ♥
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Post by Lisa on Apr 8, 2009 13:24:11 GMT 10
Absolutely fantabulous. Well, except the title...
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Post by Rosie on Apr 8, 2009 22:05:17 GMT 10
Absolutely fantabulous. Well, except the title... *shelves plans for Lisa might be slightly awesome if you squint*
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Post by Lisa on Apr 8, 2009 22:09:21 GMT 10
LMAO! Ah, you've totally made my morning, Rosie.
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Post by Blade on Apr 9, 2009 11:24:50 GMT 10
I do like this. Lots. =) Anything to do with Delia just makes me all bubbly inside. Screw being a knight, I'd rather be Delia...of course without the whole regicide thing...
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Post by Katty on Apr 9, 2009 12:56:39 GMT 10
Thank you
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Post by zbilja on Apr 13, 2009 17:18:05 GMT 10
Rosierocks?
But I love it.
Seriously.
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Post by Katty on Apr 14, 2009 14:49:51 GMT 10
Hahaha yeah... the title came to me in a dream But thanks
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Post by Mirage on Apr 16, 2009 12:34:39 GMT 10
This makes me feel so sorry for him...and it's amazing to see Delia through a three-year-old's eyes.
Amazing, basically.
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