Kit
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Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 1, 2010 10:43:49 GMT 10
Title: War wounds Rating: R Length: 210 Competitor: Alanna Round: 1/H Summary: Kel attempts to compare battle scars. The Lioness has other ideas.
“And this?”
Kel traced a finger along the scar that sliced between Alanna’s breasts. Faded, now, eerily straight from magical healing, but still a deep change in flesh. “This is—”
“—the one is with all the history, yes.” Alanna’s hand covered Kel’s, teasing her palm and fingers, lifting it away so she could flick her tongue around the knuckles, the finger tips dented from beaks and claws, palms and wrists striped by callous, but still sensitive enough for Kel to gasp. “Oh.”
She laughed, faintly. “I don’t know how you’re doing that.” Kel used her free hand to sketch through Alanna’s faded, coppery hair. To draw slow lines down her cheek and throat; collarbone and breast, pale and yet substantial, blue veins tracing through in unexpected delicacy. She licked her lips. Swallowed down the faint taste of bitter almonds that clung to her skin. “They’re just hands. They shouldn’t feel so—”
“They’re yours, and beautiful.” Alanna, even shivering, was direct.
“Think of everything you’ve done with them.”
Laughter was unexpected and glorious, fizzing through her body.
“You just like the taste of yourself, Lioness.” She shuddered, free hand clenching briefly, pausing in its slow swipe down the older woman’s belly, as Alanna swallowed, deep.
“On you, certainly.”
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 1, 2010 10:52:40 GMT 10
Oh, this is wonderful!
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Post by Katty on Feb 1, 2010 11:13:08 GMT 10
Kitty, you're amazing <3
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kiz
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Post by kiz on Feb 1, 2010 11:31:00 GMT 10
This is hot. Well done!
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Minuit
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Helping George out of the Closet
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Post by Minuit on Feb 1, 2010 11:39:10 GMT 10
*dies*
guh! I think this fried my brain! ;D But in such a good way! ;D
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Kit
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Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 1, 2010 11:58:49 GMT 10
Oh, now I'm flustered!
Glad to please...
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Post by Lisa on Feb 1, 2010 12:02:55 GMT 10
*guh* My brain is officially mush. Thank you, Kitty - it was a short but wild ride!
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Post by Verasque on Feb 1, 2010 14:47:09 GMT 10
At this rate, we all might be dead with incoherency by the end of the week!
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Post by greenie on Feb 2, 2010 8:36:55 GMT 10
I ♥ this! What I like best is that you have Alanna so matter of fact about her scar, I think that's exactly the attitude she would have to it.
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