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Post by greenie on Feb 4, 2010 17:59:23 GMT 10
Title: Position Rating: PG Length: 201 Competitor: Alanna Round/Fight: 1/H Summary: Kel's not used to doing what Alanna likes best.
“Stop, you’re doing it wrong again.” “I’m sorry.” Alanna snorted. “Don’t apologise, just do it properly. I’m glad you’ve got the effort and the enthusiasm, but really, Kel, your technique is appalling.” Kel wiped her face. “But I haven’t-“ “I know, I know. It’s been a while, and it’s not what you usually do. That’s no excuse for getting out of practice.” “I’ll practice more.” “I expect you to; you’re staying here for another two weeks.” She grinned. They were both panting slightly, but Kel smiled back. “You don’t mind having to help me?” Alanna laughed. “Gods, no. And don’t be silly, you’ll get better.” She slid her hand down Kel’s thigh and moved her leg further out. “You were disadvantaging yourself, having it like that before. You’ll find it much better with your leg positioned like this, trust me.” “Thank you,” Kel told her, and leaned forwards to kiss her. Alanna let her but then pushed her away. “Kel,” she protested. “I had you in the perfect position, and now you’ve gone and moved again.” “I’m sorry,” said Kel, and moved back to the way she was. “See? I’m ready now.” Alanna raised her sword, and they resumed their sparring.
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Kit
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Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 4, 2010 18:11:20 GMT 10
The double entendre nearly killed me, particularly when we hit, "Kel wiped her face."
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Post by PeroxidePirate on Feb 4, 2010 22:26:02 GMT 10
Heehee!
And the summary is perfect.
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EymberFyire
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Kel/Lalasa. I will go down with this ship.
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Post by EymberFyire on Feb 5, 2010 6:26:21 GMT 10
That was awesome.
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Post by Rosie on Feb 5, 2010 8:46:55 GMT 10
Loved it - especially using swordplay for double entendre in femmeslash! Very clever.
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