Kit
Squire
Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 5, 2010 19:28:51 GMT 10
Title: Bout: 11 Rating: R Length: 100 Competitor: Alanna Round: 1/H Summary: Kel exacts small revenge
“Let me…”
Sudden, clean withdrawal leaves her gasping. Her body aches and is open: raw around where the other once was. Alanna’s eyes are wide beneath the makeshift band, and she sees only red-shot black. She feels the raw silk, tiny fibres suddenly ragged on her skin. Close, held back. She is, and she is not. She breathes in the airless room.
“Kel.”
Her voice is husky and sweet. “I told you. No talking.”
“Ah—”Calluses across her mouth. Alanna swallows, drags her tongue over them. Kisses. Shifts to bite.
Kel’s laugh breaks: her resolve does not.
“Quiet, if you please, Lioness.”
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Post by Lisa on Feb 6, 2010 8:50:41 GMT 10
^ I love this sentence!!
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Post by greenie on Feb 6, 2010 10:32:44 GMT 10
*seconds Lisa*
The way you show the playful wickedness between them is great!
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