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Post by Katty on Feb 15, 2010 22:42:36 GMT 10
Title: Practicality Rating: PG Length: 175 Competitor: Vania Round/Fight: 1/F Summary: For five years, they are practical. Notes: I finally managed to write more fic for Vania but my hand is killing me - - - Five years. It was how long the Count of King’s Reach had been married to his royal wife. It was a comfortable, practical marriage. He did heroic things, she looked pretty, and they put on a good show for her father, the King. For five years, it was a marriage that worked. For five years, she had let him pretend she was her sister. Her eyes were brown, not blue, and her hair was much lighter – but when he closed his eyes in the heat of passion, she was his Empress of Carthak. For five years, he had let her pretend he didn’t know about Keladry. He let her disappear in the night, pretending to sleep when she shut the door and scurried to her Lady Knight lover. In the morning, he would wake up with her beside him. On the first day of the sixth year, he woke up to a note. I don’t want practicality, I want her. V.
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Post by Lisa on Feb 15, 2010 22:51:28 GMT 10
^____^ I adore this on so many levels. *contented sigh*
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Post by journeycat on Feb 16, 2010 1:56:26 GMT 10
Oh, this is gorgeous. I love the undertones of Kalasin/Faleron, and the way they both use each other.
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Rowena
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Post by Rowena on Feb 16, 2010 2:29:30 GMT 10
I like the format and how they both have secrets, and the ending is lovely. Good job! (Hope your hand feels better)
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