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Post by darkakane on Feb 19, 2010 23:43:58 GMT 10
Title: I Missed Rating: G Length: 167 Competitor: Buri Round/Fight: 1/E Summary: Kel Laments. Notes: uhhh… I have no idea where this came from… Poem-ish?
I missed having him here to come up behind me and hug me. I missed having him here to twirl me around and kiss me. I missed making him laugh or smile. I missed him making me laugh or smile. I missed feeling special and loved. I missed feeling beautiful. I missed feeling like the most important person in his life. I missed it all, that is, of course…
Until she came and swept me off my feet, carried me away to their bed and ensconced me within their marriage.
They hid me from the world and the slander. They made me feel beautiful, They made me feel needed, and special. They gave my confidence back I believed in myself once again, I was, once again, Keladry of Mindelan, Lady Knight of the realm And no longer vulnerable. I had everything I needed or could ever want. A pity they died 3 years ago, isn’t it? I love them, My Buri and Raoul. Always, and forever, together.
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Kit
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Duchess of Emelan
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Post by Kit on Feb 19, 2010 23:47:28 GMT 10
Very interesting free-verse! The Neal in me, still left over from the last round, approves mightily. And this is sweet and poignant.
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Post by greenie on Feb 19, 2010 23:50:13 GMT 10
Ooh, very interesting! Nicely done!
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Post by Lisa on Feb 20, 2010 17:19:50 GMT 10
This was a fascinating little piece!!
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Post by darkakane on Feb 22, 2010 1:10:25 GMT 10
Thank you. I'm glad you guys liked it ^_^
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